tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-701291490898300053.post3721718832406723221..comments2011-02-25T13:20:13.248-08:00Comments on barefoot.ballad: Lamentations of a Rogue ChildAlyshahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17436034058407908486noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-701291490898300053.post-50506387584938965602011-02-25T13:20:13.248-08:002011-02-25T13:20:13.248-08:00mmmmmm...I love when you write. I love the express...mmmmmm...I love when you write. I love the expression and the feeling that you place in your characters. So good! Thank you for sharing this with us.<br /><br />I will say that I was slightly confused in the paragraph with the cat. I was confused with the pronouns. For a second, I questioned which was the girl and which was the boy. I figured it out, though!!! :)<br /><br />Also, I really like the feeling of father/daughter connection that you created. Not only was it relatable, but it also really exhibited what you wanted to present to the audience. <br /><br />Loved the inclusion of the Bible verse at the end!dr3am3rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13180061943340517074noreply@blogger.com